2023 WNAF Collegiate Better Newspaper Contest

Sports Story ( Division A,Division B) Back

  • Place Name: First Place
    Contestant Name: The Daily Cardinal
    Entry Title: Maddie Schwartz has done it all for Wisconsin, but now she doesn’t have to
    Entry Credit: Justin Alpert
    Judge Comment: Creative writing, clever turns of phrase ("weekend at the office," "rubber-armed righty"). Highly readable. Note: Use of male generic language will need to be reconsidered, given that "third baseman" is not an accurate descriptor. Otherwise, nicely done.
  • Place Name: Second Place
    Contestant Name: Royal Purple
    Entry Title: Football holds on, headed to quarterfinals
    Entry Credit: Parker Olsen
    Judge Comment: Recap, but dynamic writing. Nicely done lede, and the running theme of heat in the freezing weather indicates extra thought. Punchy, dynamic writing. Good job.
  • Place Name: Third Place
    Contestant Name: The Daily Cardinal
    Entry Title: Converting at the charity stripe: Former Badger gives back through basketball
    Entry Credit: Matthew Neschis
    Judge Comment: Well-written profile. Quotes well placed. Enjoyable to read.
  • Place Name: Honorable Mention
    Contestant Name: The Clarion
    Entry Title: From coach to player
    Entry Credit: Kelly Feng
    Judge Comment: Nicely done, although I think the last two graphs should have led the story.
  • Competition Comment: The differentiation between the winning entries and other submission is creativity and language use. Recapping a game need not be staid.